I really need to make some more music, the fuck is wrong with me

it’s nerve wracking when you haven’t been creative for a long time isn’t it? The fear of it being rubbish or boring

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that guy sure knows how to record a song, whoever he is

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That’s pretty ace, puts me in mind of the Divine Comedy (obviously) but then also not! Like it a lot though

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It’s the storytelling and lite-jazz chords, all good stuff. It’s something I enjoy about the always divisive Barenaked Ladies as well, who I think are masterful songwriters in a similar vein. Definitely positive comparisons.

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Casanova was their big breakthrough - it’s no so much stylistic, they’re so nineties it’s unbelievable. But it’s the wry storytelling that rings the comparison for me.

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really like the chorus on this, very nice chords and vocal melody! Kind of reminds me of my fav era of Belle & Sebastian

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you’ve inspired me to set my studio back up next week too so thanks for that :relaxed:

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I really like this. The lyrics are absolutely superb.

I also thought Divine Comedy before I saw what @GoFasterStripes had written

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ooh that guitar line that comes in at 1:40 :ok_hand: reminds me of jamie lenman’s more chilled stuff from his first solo album this

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Definitely lean in. There’s a strong lyrical voice there.

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yeah! there’s a similar sense of playfulness in his stuff as well i think, never forgetting that Rock Music Is Good Fun

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Had a go with his, not sure where this is going but it was fun to write. A good prompt.

Summary

RAINDROPS FALLING ON A POOL

Sleeping-dreaming was one of his favourite things but that night he had spent nearly all the dreamtime available to him trying to put his shoes on in his dream, which was more difficult because the laces and the coordination required to tie them were completely different from those in his waking life. He had finally got them on and started running to catch up with everyone else when the alarm scattered his dream to shattered pieces.

Feeling cheated, he snoozed it and tried to pick up the thread of dream again, but his new half-dream was something repetitive and unimportant. Though he could not be sure, it was something vaguely banal like raindrops falling on a pool, just that over and over.

Over and over again, waking up was exhausting. Having to swap the neutral no-temperature of his dream for the bone cold winter morning. Knowing that now he was awake he would have to, sooner or later, get up and get on with things.

After all that was done and he was on the bus, staring out through the window of the bus, he thought back to the dream he could remember - that pretty but boring scene of raindrops falling into a pool, each one sending out ripples that spread across the water until they ran out of energy or collided with another ripple coming the other way. He wished he could have fought his way back to discover the tantalising content of his original dream, which surely would have held something exciting and special, if only he had managed to get his shoes on more quickly.

He started to think about raindrops not just falling into a pool, but pelting down, smashing the surface of the water to pieces. The pool filling up - now containing the water with which it had already been filled, plus the water now being thrown down by the sky. He couldn’t remember ever having seen a picture of a drowned pool, but it must happen - in a flood there must be pools that were overwhelmed. They must sit there, square little bodies of water, submerged under brown torrents of floodwater.

And maybe, if you were brave enough, or quick enough, or clever enough… it might be possible to dive and swim down into the floodwater, through all those layers until you broke through the final layer, the final covering of raindrops, and into that original dream of water.

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I like this

reminds me a bit of Cosmicomics by Italo Calvino, that mixture of the cosmic setting and the matter of fact style of writing

hiya epimer, i did a bit of rubbish guitar improv for you. hoep you liek!

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I enjoyed this! Is that some hot e-bow action I’m hearing?

Not yet, avery’s ebow will be getting its first outing at band practice shortly!

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My painting’s about finished, bar a few touch ups. It’s for a friend of mine with whom I have had good times singing Incredible String Band songs, particularly Job’s Tears. So these are some teardrops falling, containing Job and also other items from song titles on the album Wee Tam. First time using the easel I got for Xmas and enjoyed it very much!

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This is lush, absolutely love it

aw cheers pal!