Experimental gone too far in music [Brutal Honesty Feedback Thread]

A friend of mine from university makes tunes and I help him here and there putting together videos. We recently finished up one titled “Head” and were pretty proud of it. Of course theres room for improvement and we would love all thoughts and feedback so we can grow. If you hate it tell us, if you love it thank you, but if you don’t thank you for the feedback!