Feedback for new artist!

Been working on music for a bit now and i need some feedback and see what i can change

Even if its not your genre of music tell me if its listenable…

And also tell me whats your favorite song Post your links in the comments so we as a group can give eachother feedback as well

Link: https://soundcloud.com/msemperakaboss

       https://soundcloud.com/msemperakaboss

super catchy also love the beat :slight_smile:

Thanks you make music?

Sorry for the late reply and yeah but trying to make music more often.