#1

I haven’t been able to find a music feedback feed. Post your best new songs here, give feedback to 2 others on their songs.

My new song below, any thoughts, recommendations etc.?

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#2

Very nice - I really love your voice, interesting in a very good way.

In terms of production, are you planning to do anything else with it? I wonder if it may benefit from a little reverb on the vocals, maybe blended with some reverb from the piano… but then I’m a sucker for little electronic flourishes and it may not be something you see working.

Either way, good work.

#3

…and as luck would have it, I’ve just uploaded my first new one in ages ahead of a gig next weekend.

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#4

Definitely something I would agree with yes. I think it could use a bit of work production wise.

#5

I listened to your track and the production sounds very crisp and professional. I wish I could give more valuable comments but I am afraid this music area is outside my knowledgeability.

#6

Loving this track very keen to learn of your music I hos an online radio show called The Romstock radio show which feature indie bands and would be honored if I could play your music on my show
This song has a very nice Piano start, Great voice

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#7

you have a great voice. my biggest feedback would be to use less auto-tune, i don’t think you need it.

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#8

Oh what your probably hearing is the weird transitions when we spliced tracks together. I didn’t use autotune but we took many vocal takes to make sure they were just right. But yeah I definitely agree the production needs to be smoother

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#9

i really resonate with this idea of putting drafts out for crowd-sourced feedback. i just started doing this as part of my process for finishing a record (explanation here: https://llllllll.co/t/peer-review-ingmob-morpho/9249)

here’s the most recent track, what do you think?

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#10

very cool. this is kind of stuff i wanna do. love the percussion.

new track from moi

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#11

Come on now @ingMob the rules are pretty straightforward, yet you’ve said nothing about Daughter that @Elights posted.

Play fair.

#12

I don’t see you giving feedback to any other tracks @supersamurai you’re not joining in the spirit of the thread.

"If all you do is take, one day there’ll be nothing left to take"
Marilyn Munroe

#13

Oh, cool, this thread’s still going. Will have a listen to the new posts later on. I really like the crowd/cloud based feedback approach, good work on setting it up.