This runs it pretty close:

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

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that’s a great poem too!

what’s wrong with everybody on here?

Hi Elaina! Having some lines / phrases already in mind is a great start. I’d use those as a basis for how the rest of the poem will shape up. How many stresses are in the phrase you like? How does that flow when you pair it with a phrase of similar length? One you have a pattern you like, keep adding to it and seeing how it goes. I always liked writing to a strict form because it was a scaffolding I could fit ideas into - the less structure I had, the harder it was to assemble.

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Had to write a poem for gcse coursework, couldn’t do it the thought made me cringe so hard so I just refused to do it, failed English gcse probably as a result

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I like that poem

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how short can a poem be?

asking for “a friend”

Try to use a pen
Things written down on paper
Come out much better

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Literally everything is a poem if it can be read in verse
And the good ones are just generally about normal life but have a little clever double
meaning

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Ezra Pound wrote a famous two line poem:

In a Station of the Metro

The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.

No reason you couldn’t have a shorter one.

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ah mine is longer and much worse.

Pound was a horrible fascist though so you’ll always have that.

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Spent ages writing a one word poem and the best thing I could think of was “caught”

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My one word poem would be:

tears

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ooooh a tailor eh

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Like this:

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beautiful

write a thing that you like and then give it to mistersteve to put on his page template. sorted!

i read this years ago even though i have no desire to write poetry but found it kind of interesting

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or like this