āDrenched in artificeā is a good way to put it tbf. Heās an actor playing parts in the stories he writes which is always going to see accusations of inauthenticity thrown his way. I can see how that step removal can put people off but thatās just one way to make art, innit? It doesnāt all have to be directly confessional.
Donāt really understand the difficult bits shaved off thing though. Not sure anyone has listened to the Black Rider and complained itās too damn accessible.