#39

So much fucking ^this
Unless it is a haiku
The one exception

#40

Nah.

Same with songs. Don’t need to rhyme.

Poetry’s just songs without the music.

#41

Nah, if it
doesn’t rhyme then
it’s
just
awk
ward prose. Fact.

#42

Truth bomber
Truth BOMBer

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#43

where did you get this silly idea from?

#44

So near yet so spar
I added SO to make five
Doesn’t even rhyme

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#45

songs that don’t rhyme actually make me sick up a bit

at least poems I can just kid myself that the supposed “poet” is just trying to talk to me

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#46

Awww, thanks for your support!

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#47

I’m working on a some satirical heavy handed poem. so far it goes like so:

strong and stable
willing and able
so then I says to Mabel
I says

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#48

Rhyming poems are pretty silly compared to the non-rhyming ones tbh

#49

I’ve been working with a poet for the last few months, she’s finally got some of it on youtube so here you go, be nice

(I am Mischievous Wisdom so naturally this a lil’ bit jaggy)

I write spoken word stuff, I went to a workshop where we wrote haiku’s, was interesting cos there’s way more rules than you might expect. This one doesn’t follow 100% of the rules and is called Panic Attack

convinced i’m dying
stumble to find my parents
oh i am naked

#50

Don’t really get haikus to be humble

#51

sounds like a banging party.

#52

Agreed. Something clunky about changing the words you want to use just so that they rhyme.

#53

don’t think stephen merchant does poetry m8

#54

No.

#55

They’re a lovely couple, John and Mary, aren’t they?

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#56

then who was phone?

#57

the poems were shit :smiley:

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#58

The Armando Iannucci Show, the home of my favourite ever reveal of a Scotsman:

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