I’m not listening out for the lyrics especially, it’s just there’s too many clunky lines that leap out. Like you I can overlook dodgy lyrics if the lines are delivered well and there’s a tune behind it. unfortunately neither of those things are applicable here.
Feel like I’m maybe piling on a bit but then again, have you seen the reviews for this album? I mean, I’m not knocking anyone for liking it but there’s literally been not one negative review for this record online. Seems a little odd to me given that the lack of tunes is a glaring flaw.