Share your juvenilia

I can’t like this due to the lack of the obvious portmanteau.

If it makes you feel any better @AQOS a few years ago I discovered a complete set of lyrics I wrote for She’s Electric but it was “I’m a psychotic” or something. Baffling because I don’t really know why I would have done this.

I actually fully approve of you just writing song titles. I’m imagining you getting a band together and it being like:

“Ooh, what’s ‘The road that led to the death of our mothers’ like?”

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Fight Apathy! Or don’t.

Is exactly the kind of title I’d have come up with at 14 and smiled to myself about how witty I was

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Dweller on the Threshold

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Damn

Oh shit this has just reminded me that I rewrote the lyrics to Teenage Dirtbag to make it about a boy I fancied in year 7

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these had actual songs behind them but they’re awful nonetheless:

It hurts, don’t it?
Suffer / empty room

I definitely have a list of terrible song ideas knocking around at my mums so I will gladly contribute to this soon.

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Lyrics time… honest to god II, if you thought the song titles were bad, just wait. However hard you cringe, know it’s worse for me.


I’ve never heard so much laughter
From such unfunny people


You can get in anywhere for free
And your dealer gives you coke for cheap
You said you’ll get half price tickets for me
and a holiday or two or three

You know all the celebs
But I think you’re a pleb
Get the fuck off my lawn


What I’m sure I thought would be my magnum opus, ‘You’re a Shipwreck’:

Standing on the bottom
Reaching up above
Your tongue is undone
Your face you try to hide
You kiss a hundred times
Surgery over common sense
Hurricanes and frieght trains
Living in a bunker
You’re a shipwreck

Cut your own pie
Twitching into next week
Squealing and crackling
Roaming underneath
Her ears are burning
Cutting holes in her dress
Blood dripping from her teeth
This is the beginning of the end
You’re a shipwreck


Set the Woods on Fire:

Hide in the darkness wearing black attire
Pour down the petrol and with a flick of your lighter
The flames lick up and your grip gets tighter
Set the woods on fire


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Cut your own pie!!!

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I think that juke deserves some sort of new badge for all this.

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That’s it, DiS is over for the week, @mods shut it down

See you all next week

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Beautiful

Advantage Jesus has been making me burst into fits of giggles every time I think of it since last night. Amazing work.

I have a bunch of old school books full of lyrics I wrote in my teens. Unfortunately after revisiting them recently I realised they were less, “haha look how bad these are!” and more “oh god these are so bleak I hope this kid got help and didn’t hurt anybody.” I was an unhappy child.

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Take THAT!

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:grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning:

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Was this song a tribute to @GEOFF?

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Well he’s HALF right at least (I know no celebs of any reasonable repute but the rest of it checks out).

There’s probably someone reading this who knows all the celebs and is feeling absolutely done in right now

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You know all the celebs
But I think you’re a pleb
Get the fuck off my lawn

Might get this tattooed on my back

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