I would love feedback, and any comments on how i can improve myself. Thanks.
the Waka Flocka sample doesn’t really work. maybe use something less obvious/more interesting?
I feel like you could say more with your lyrics, be more insightful. and extend your vocab? the lyrics are kind of identikit.
vibe of the beat is pretty good tho
like, I got a kind of chill spacey feeling from it. go with that. and ditch the autotune - use a vocoder instead. vocoders are dope.
you know i never really messed with vocoders, but i definitely give it a try.