Stray Dogs by Rookie The MC

music
hiphop
rap

#1

https://soundcloud.com/rookie-the-mc/stray-dogs

I would love feedback, and any comments on how i can improve myself. Thanks.


#2

the Waka Flocka sample doesn’t really work. maybe use something less obvious/more interesting?

I feel like you could say more with your lyrics, be more insightful. and extend your vocab? the lyrics are kind of identikit.

vibe of the beat is pretty good tho :thumbsup:


#3

like, I got a kind of chill spacey feeling from it. go with that. and ditch the autotune - use a vocoder instead. vocoders are dope.


#4

you know i never really messed with vocoders, but i definitely give it a try.