It’s just bad really is all I mean. Unless winning had a different sense, back then, like how people in books contemporary to this would be described as ‘excited’ when these days we’d more likely say ‘agitated’.
Anyway, I totally admit a lot of my feelings on this are very much based on personal appraisal. I just don’t like the same simile being used close together like that. And I don’t like not being sure I am interpreting the same thing the writer intends 